Festina lente

Time leaves shadows behind

Like fragments of a broken mirror

Haunting mankind.

Happiness hides into a cup of coffee

Drink it slow and fall asleep...

Dreamers thinking deep (pic pic)

Rainbow on the starry sky;

Commets on the other side

Make a wish before you die.

A pointless destiny we lead

All the trouble underneath

Nothing matters indeed.

Si acum o scurta analiza a poemului meu- tinde sa fie o poezie contemporana, desigur cu cateva influente specifice perioadei romantice (prima strofa) respectiv existentiale (ultima strofa); rime puerile, onomatopee - reflecta caracterul ludic al creatiei, neconventional. Alte sugestii?